Cool Cloud 9!!!
On the second week of the holidays I went to Cloud 9. I went there with 3 of my cousins and the supervisor was my aunty that is teaching me dance. We went to cloud 9 because we had a long day of dance and we were stressed out. The first thing we did there was play on the normal trampoline that everyone can go on, Then we went to the foam pit. The only thing we had to be careful about is that one of our cousins wasn't allowed to come in the foam pit because she was too young to go in there. The last half in hour we surprised each other by going in the foam pit. The second photo shows you the tag that you wear so you can go in there. So that was the best part of the holidays.
A super post Mahee. Well done adding lots of detail about your day. It sounds like you had an amazing time. Remember to proofread your writing and to get a buddy to check it. You had a couple of little errors.
ReplyDeleteI have checked all my errors and I have had a buddy to read to check Mr Sloan
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